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All Alone In This World by ~provokingdeath:iconprovokingdeath:

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The words they say are empty hollow sounds
The things they do are cruel and mean actions
Why do I not notice the good?
Have I blocked them all out
Have I been so blind?

I sit and wait for life to follow suit
Of a happy merry time
That once was
But Never will be again

The walls have gone so high
The ladder out falls so short
Why can't I escape?
I need to so bad, but I can't

Nobody is here to help me out
I can only depend on myself
It's what I've done for so long
And it's not about to change for me

The safety light has burned out
There's no replacement
There's no one coming to fix it
I'm stuck in open dangerous waters without a light to see

I bravely walk ahead
Scared to no end
Yet I tread ahead
Alone forever until I die.
©2005-2009 ~provokingdeath
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Submitted: February 28, 2005
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Well, I wrote this sitting in Geometry wondering why in the world I trust people. And why I try to be someone people want me to be. I realized I havent said what Ive wanted to say for fear of being stupid. I haven't told people things that I now wish I had. I haven't acted how Ive wanted to act. I haven't been true to myself and I hate it. Sorry this has nothing to do with why I wrote the poem itself. was talking to the people at my desk and they were being superficial again saying 'ooh i want a guy taller than me.... a hott guy... blah blah blah' And i joined in saying it shouldnt matter as long as they are nice and of course they were complete asses to me so I was just like you know what whatever i spoke my mind I dont give a rats ass if you listened anyway. So I wrote the poem.... sorry for this crappy description...

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~dyslexicmoose:icondyslexicmoose: Feb 28, 2005, 3:58:33 PM
wow. its so pretty!! depressingish yes, but pretty and expressive none the less. I like some of the phrases you use in it too, like the "that once was but never will be again" twas spiffy!!

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~provokingdeath:iconprovokingdeath: Mar 1, 2005, 1:48:45 AM
Thanks, it just came to me... course i did not pay attention in class but minor issue.... You can feel free to use any of the phrases I used in stuff you may eventually write in the not so near and not so distant future....

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